Writing Ideas # 1: Scene from a book

I’m always on the lookout for fantastic writing ideas, inspiration, prompts or other tools to give me a kick start when I can’t think of anything to write or I’m stuck in a story or book. I subscribe to the Writer’s Digest newsletter and get emails from time to time about writing ideas. I got such an email this morning with ‘5 Ways to Come Up With Great Story Ideas’. So, I have decided to post each of the prompts and my response.

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Number 1

So, here goes the first one:

The Prompt:
Take a very small, seemingly non-important scene from one of your favorite books and consider what it’d be like if that were the opening scene to your novel. Change the characters of course, and add one or more unique elements to that scene. The key is to give you a starting point and then let your imagination run wild. While there are many ways to stay inspired, this challenge really takes something that you love (an old book) and gives it new life.

My Response:

One of my favorite books is The Count of Monte Cristo by Alexandre Dumas. If you are not familiar with it, it is a very old story, written around 1844. One of my very favorite scenes of the book (although I have many favorite parts) is when the main character, Edmond Dantes, escapes from his island prison by posing as the dead body of a fellow inmate and friend, Abbe Faria. Below is the actual passage from the book:

“And at the same instant Dantes felt himself flung into the air like a wounded bird, falling, falling with a rapidity that made his blood curdle. Although drawn downwards by the heavy weight which hastened his rapid descent, it seemed to him as if the fall lasted for a century. At last, with a horrible splash, he darted like an arrow into the ice-cold water, and as he did so he uttered a shrill cry, stifled in a moment by his immersion beneath the waves.”

And here is how I would re-write it to portray an opening scene of a book.

Suddenly finding consciousness, Matthew found himself in the dark. He was moving, but did not know how. It was as if he were being carried by rough hands, but he could not see anything, could not move his body. He heard voices, they were speaking of a cemetery and having a bite to eat after they were done there. Matthew sensed the danger that surrounded him in his blind cocoon and so he remained silent. Feeling carefully with his hands which were restrained with course twine, Matthew concluded that he was in a sack of some kind, like a bundle of potatoes. Suddenly, the men carrying him slowed. He became aware of the sound of the sea very close to them and could smell the brine through the cloth that bound him. The men began swinging him back and forth and at the count of three, Matthew was airborne. He felt himself flying through the air, the cold, moist sea air swirled all around his fiber prison. Plummeting like a rock, Matthew wondered if his flight would ever end. And just when he thought he would never touch the earth again, his body was shocked with the freezing cold temperatures of the icy sea. Sinking like a stone, Matthew frantically began writhing to escape, his lungs already beginning to burn and ache.

So what do you think? Try the prompt yourself and see what you can come up with! Share your link in the comment section below so I can read yours too. 🙂

Happy Writing!

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Today’s OneWord: Master

I was the master of my domain. I was in charge of all the lands that lay out before me. I strode to the top of the hill to get a better look. The birds soared around the hill as if paying homage to their new king. I took a deep breath and nearly choked.

“Frank!” A voice yelled up at me.

“Hey Frank, get the hell off of there! We need to doze it.”

I grabbed my hard hat and surfed down the rubbish heap on a cardboard box.

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Today’s OneWord: Promise

In the shadows of twilight, a promise floats on the breeze.
In the movement of love, a happiness follows behind
Swirling around and around, the joy trails in happy flight
And takes wing to fly with stars into the dark night.

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Favorite Quotes

Hey Everyone! I was sitting at my computer this morning with a headache and a Pepsi and wondering what I could post about. Reading through the Freshly Pressed tips and hints, I saw one that sparked me. The writing prompt asked what my favorite quote is and why, so I decided to share that here.

My favorite quote is one often heard and shared but the author is unknown. There are many speculations and guesses and one I think to be true, but no proof as to which, if any, are the correct explanation of the author for these words of wisdom. My favorite quote is this:

“Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but rather the moments that take our breath away.” ~ Anon

There are many variations of this quote, many people claim to be the author and so forth and so on. However, the meaning is the same and it would not be more appealing to find out who wrote it or where it came from. This quotation is my life map. It guides me and grounds me when I need to be rooted.

What does it mean? To me, it means that we can live to be 100 and breathe millions of breaths in that lifetime, but in the end, it doesn’t matter. What matters is the lives we touch and the person we are. How do you treat people? Are you mean and callous with the feelings of others? Or are you sensitive and kind? Those who know me well know that I joke and tease a lot, but they also know I would do anything for those that are close to me. I would give my jacket in a snow storm to someone I love and then my pants and socks to someone else. I am fiercely loyal to those I love and I love many.

At the end of our lives, it does not  matter if we’re 20 or 85. It matters that we shared our hearts with others and took the time to let them know they matter. Because everyone deserves to feel like they matter, to know that they are important and to feel special. Everyone in this world has something special about them that is worth sharing. Yes, everyone.

This quote also reminds me to think about the moments in my life that were amazing. That first second when I held each of my children for the first time. When someone said something to me that was amazing. When I did something nice for someone and saw their tears of joy. That’s what it’s about.  Those moments that fill me with love and joy.

The power of words is amazing. Our words have a huge affect on those around us, whether we always know it or not. Careless words are damaging and hurtful, while kind words are uplifting and inspiring. Our words have the power to save a life or damn it.

This quotation reminds me that what I do matters, what I do affects others and they are counting on me to be uplifting and inspiring.

Do you have a favorite quotation? If so, post it in the comments below. I will pick my favorite 5 and those people will get a free goody. Nothing big, but a cool sticker, a neat card or bookmark or something. 🙂

Have a wonderful day and remember to share your heart with others and make each breath count.

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Today’s OneWord: Must

“I simply MUST have this!” Kara swung around, the yellow skirt of the sundress swirling around her legs. She beamed.

“We can’t, Kara. You know we can’t.” Matt said it quietly and darted his eyes around to make sure no one could hear them.

“I didn’t say I was going to BUY it.” Kara winked and headed toward the dressing room. Emerging a few minutes later, she headed for the door.

Matt started after her and looked back at the empty hanger in the changing room.

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Blog Feature: Reading Culture

I have decided to post bios on blogs I like, so you too can share in the fun/joy/humor/cool stuff. 🙂

For those of you who love reading, there is a great new blog in town. This blog, called Reading Culture, is fairly new, but has already shared several new books and authors that look pretty good. So, if you’re looking for something good to read, hop on over to Reading Culture and get some ideas for new reads.

Happy Reading!!

 

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Reading Culture Blog

 

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Today’s OneWord: Reference

Maggie put her bookbag on the table and walked toward the back of the library. She had to get her report on interpersonal communication started.

Walking to the reference section, she heard scuffling and what she thought was voices. Creeping quietly, she peered around the corner of the last row. Her eyes widened and she was frozen where she stood.

A tiny, blue, baby dragon peeked up at her from under a pile of books.

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Writer’s Digest: Your Story – Hair, Tangled, Fresh

Writer’s Digest has a contest every once in a while (I think it’s every other month). It’s called Your Story. They give you three words and you have to write one sentence that is 25 words or less using all three of the words.

The rules are as follows for the competition:

The rules:

  • Your sentence (just one, only one!) must be 25 words or fewer, no exceptions.
  • One entry per person, please.
  • How it all works: We’ll select the top 10 entries and post them on our forum. Readers will vote for their favorites to help rank the winners.
  • This is a free writing competition. The prize is publication in WD.
  • You can also submit your sentence an online form.
  • Finally, as we say about this contest in the magazine: “You can be funny, poignant, witty, etc. It is, after all, your story.”

The three words for the November/December competition were: hair, tangled, fresh

Even though the deadline has passed, I thought this a fun writing exercise, so I went ahead and tried my hand. Here’s what I came up with:

His hair was tangled and matted with fresh blood that upon closer inspection, was not his.

What do you think? Do you like it? Tell me in the comments below. Also, if you like, post your response to this one. I’d love to read your best efforts.

To get in on the fun, check out the Writer’s Digest website for the Your Story competition HERE.

Thanks for reading and Happy Writing! 🙂

Today’s OneWord: Experience

Mark screamed like a bitch and threw his arms around in the air.

Dan, frozen by the female screeching of his very male friend, stared with wide eyes as Mark flailed around and finally fell on the floor.

“Mark?” Dan finally managed to say. “Are you alright?”

“Fucking SPIDER!” Mark yelled with his face in the rug.

“Well,” Dan said, resuming eating his lunch, “that was an experience.”

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Today’s OneWord: Lord

I didn’t stop to think about it. I knelt and bowed my head. The habit fell forward, shrouding my face from the observance of others. I closed my eyes, waiting for the words of commitment to be spoken. Those who sought my downfall would never find me in service to the lord.

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